Reviews for Burning Apart
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
"Oh it burns my heart

So I try to replace it.

But I'll never try to forget"

Were the best lines! Yay!
XxZebbie-CullenxX chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
I liked the choice of words in this one a lot :D
heartbroken922 chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
i really liked your choice of words. great job!
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
I really like the way this is written, and it seemed very honest. I like it.

Peace, Daze
kage-youkai girl chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
wow. I liked it. It feels like it was straight from the heart.
Natalie-Rayne chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
I like it a lot, especially this part:

"I replace it with a fake smile,

And some days it lasts awhile"

Keep writing!