|Reviews for The Path Home|
| scharlie18 chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
So, I read Love Letters, which I enjoyed. I read all 25 chapters in about 2 sittings. :D I didn't find any major problems with that, except that even when Miranda and Carole became friends, Carole still pissed me off. But, I think that's more of a personal thing than anything else.
Next was this. The only thing that I would say is that it gets confusing when you flip back and forth between now (AKA after Love Letters) and during Love Letters. (Does that make sense?) My suggestion would be to instead of italicizing the parts where Carole is growing up, italicize the 'during Love Letters' bit. It's pretty clear to the reader which are the parts where Carole is growing up, even without the italics. Differentiating between now and during Love Letters is harder, so I would worry more about making sure the reader knows which is which.
All over, you did a good job, with Love Letters, and with The Path Home. :D
| SpawnMeister666 chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
I like this. It ties up the loose ends, which of course was the objective! Apart from an occasional typo it's a good, well written and wel balanced piece.