|Reviews for Mortava|
| Jessie My Love chapter 2 . 12/29/2008
I like this story so far. This chapter helped clear up some things for me. The characters are good, however I do feel that you describe them more in depth. They do have their distinct personalities but they still don't seem extremely real to me. But I'm sure with more description that could be fixed. So yea, good job. :]
-Jessie m p.s. returning reviews is always nice
| Jessie My Love chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
This chapter kind of confused me. I liked the idea behind the story, but I don't get exactly what is going on in this chapter. You should make sure to be a bit more clear.
I do really like the idea of this story though. I'm going to go ahead and read the next chapter
| murazrai chapter 2 . 12/29/2008
Hmm...getting lost in the alternate world...quite a good idea. The surrounding details are quite good. This story intrigues me. I'll read more when you update.
| Aleksy The Flying Onion chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Oh man! I wish I was her!
This sound very promising! I like the main character already. Wake up in a strange place and just kind of sit back and enjoy it lol. NEXT TO A HOT MAN NO LESS!
Please continue! I have many questions now!