It's been 3 years, ya ready yet?

Someday, I hope to see this on a library bookshelf.

great story! loved how you made the characters so real. hope there is a continuation :3

Loved it will there be amthird part?

Simply MARVELOUS Darlin! I want a sequel!

Only commenting cause I noticed in your summary that you wrote 'parish' -as in church parish, the word I think you were looking for is perish :) just so you know and it makes a bit more sense

This is easily one of the greatest stories on fictionpress. Lots of emotion and brother hood with the pack. Also lots of sexual tension between the males. I could sense it in the first chapter of the book. The fighting keeps a reader on the edge of their chair and the dangerous sneaking out keeps us on our toes. I only wish there was a third book so we could see a bit more growth with Mike and El. I felt they had their moments, but there just wasn't enough. Still an amazing story and I'm so glad you wrote it. An amazing read indeed.

why did you make the girl so weak and pathetic?
This story is getting boring and less interesting.

yay! they finally ended up together! :)

heya are you gonna make a new story? that would be awesome!

I thought Leo was alpha of the London pack?

i loved this and the first one, they're awesome! they were exactly what i wanted to read, if they were books, i'd buy them :) keep writing and i hope you write a third one... please? :D

heeeya its Aubree again, just wanted to ask you if you are gonna write a third part for the stories? Oh please do! i love them and i would love to know what happens in Michael's and Elaine's visit to the US!

heey you should write another book! Like, Michael and Elaine in the states! that's be awesome!

aaah loved it! I love Michael and Cassiel! i seriously love your stories!

Mwah

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