Reviews for Hell Hounds
Azukeri Mercer chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
It's a good start, I like it.

-The Blue Flash
Rogue Ridge87 chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
I'm liking the continuation of CanisLupus.

Pretty good first chapter.

Elaine is moving too slow for me but that's probably a good thing, she's young yet.

Greg is Michael's son, right? And Greg is older than Elaine if I remember correctly? Trying for a timeline :)

Can't wait for more action!
pinkeclipse chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
lol he made a bad move by asking to mate her! LOL
DaniD3 chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Oh man.. this sequel is like an early Holiday present :)

I'm not surprised that Elaine is having some problems after her ordeal in Romania. Anyone would in her position..though she is carrying So much on her young shoulders. Somthing is gonna have to give with her.

I am still rooting for Michael all the way as far as Elaine's future mate goes. Can't understand why anyone would have a problem with his age. As long as he still his sexy's a fictional story...and it works.

Poor Odolf doesn't know what he is in for with his little stunt that he just pulled and not just from Michael and the other would be suitors. I think Elaine may rip him a new one herself. lol

Can't wait for more!
demoness online chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Yay! I was so excited when I checked my email and saw that you had finally posted the second series. The first chapter was awesome, and I can't wait for the next one.
Hannah C. Thaw chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Yay! You started the next story. This makes me very happy.

Although- why is Elaine acting weird? I understand pride and being unwilling to show weakness (since I suffer from it myself), but there are always a couple people who I let help me. And why doesn't she trust Alex anymore?
Panda Blitz chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Awesome! Update soon!
Blue-Wolf13 chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
I'm really glad to see you've put up the sequel to CL. I was thinking we'd be waiting for awhile to read the next part of Elaine's story, but here it is! I'm happy to see you've decided to post it. D

Anyways I really did like the chapter, it was a good start in my opinion. I feel bad for Elaine to tell you the truth. With everything happening to her I'd feel out of it also so I don't blame her much for her weird thinking of Alex and Micheal hurting her. Nevertheless hopefully she'll realize real quick that they aren't like Leo. Not in the least bit. Also that she shouldn't push the pack away, it's her family after all and they all love her.

By the way I have to say I love Cassiel! It'll be so much fun to read about him again. Hell let's just say it'll be fun to read about all the Durand brothers. D

Oh and the whole Odolf thing...what an idiot I tell you. It was obviously a bad move saying he wanted to take Elaine as a mate and the reaction the guy got was truth to that. I can't wait to see what happens if Elaine does catch up with him though. Hopefully she'll put him in his place. D

Anyways once again I loved the chapter. Keep up the great work! I hope to see an update soon! Oh and also I find the story for the first night very ironic also. ]

P.S. If you can say...what were Micheal and Gabriel fighting about? I'm curious to say the least.
SassyCassie chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
It sounds as good as the first one. I honestly didn't know the first ended. Good Job

Cassie chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Welcome back :)

I'm glad you've started the story, so I'm hopping in for the ride.

You did a great job with the chapter, I really enjoyed it, and it portrayed the state of the pack greatly.

Uh, man, I already forgot how much I lovee Michael :)
Mish chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Oh, PLEASE teach that idiotic Odolf a lesson! I really want to see what El does to him ;)

Oh, and I truly hope that you plan for Elaine and Michael to get together - as in mates - because thinking of anyone else making her be with them pisses me off. AND, I've always wondered this: how does Michael have a son? Was he only married, so he was together with someone by law, but not their mate?
Isabellamarie chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
im so glad the storys back, and i cant wait to read the next one!
CoryD chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Yeah - very happy to see you started the sequel. This is one of my favorite series.

Two questions - I thought Leo was leader of the London Pack.

And in the beginning of this chapter - was El inside or in the woods?
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