Reviews for For You
Landcaster chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
Wow, for the moment I only had time to read/review one poem, and I'm so glad that I picked this one. First of all the overall all tone is really touching and sweet, something that may sneak a tear out between giggles, and the way you do it- how the speaker (I shan't assume anything) concedes that even though they are making a fool of themselves it is selfish because they really just want to hear the other laugh. That switch is so subtle but strong. I also like where you put the line breaks, since it seems to suit the pacing, and to me, the childlike, innocent sprawling of the poem. Finally, I really loved how you said "hyperbolize;" I thought that was just so awesome. Keep up the good work. When I get a chance I'll have to check out some of you other stuff.
StayDown chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
Okay, so this earned one hardcore "Aww" moment from me. This is so wonderful. :)