|Reviews for Umbrella|
| Landcaster chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
Haha, I really liked this. It was quite creative in a cute way, and the word art you used with the umbrella was awesome, especially since it is quite difficult to do stuff like that on this site sometimes. I thought the words were quite vivid: you have one of those rare gifts of just sounding nice to the ear. Great work, keep it up. (Btw, I used to write tons of poems in math as well, ha.)
| davidseven chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
Even without the umbrella and heart shaping, this is a poem with quite a vivid picture.
| Laura Schiller chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
Very sweet. The heart kind of looks like a raindrop here, but you can still recognize the umbrella. "my hand in yours, my heart in yours"..."your love is an umbrella for my heart"...good lines.