I've read every story you have posted on FP and i'm very impressed. They hook me in within the first few lines. You're really talented, I admit I'm a bit jealous XP

Does chance like anna too?

I like Chance better than Mark

i love the story so far, but i have to say... that i want Anna to be with Chance not Mark ha ha

Please continue soon

Cheers

Michelle

I'M NOT EVEN DONE WITH THIS CHAPTER BUT I HAVE TO POINT OUT THAT ANBERLIN IS FREAKING AMAZZING :D :D :D ! :D great story by the way! )

Love the development, however, love Chance even more. Please, Pretty Please, be good with me, and Chance, and make him "the chosen one". Another one of my loved things? Ann's personality. Crude, hostile and beautiful! Keep it up & update soon!

I really like this story. I don't understand the title, but I think that is because it's in a language that I don't speak. It doesn't have some of the problems that "The Bet" has (ie: too many characters, seriously how do you keep them straight?) and the writing is just as good, and this plot is pretty interesting, I'm interested to see where you are going with this, almost as much as I'm interested in reading the next chapter of "The Bet"

I like how this story is going. It's a teen romance, but it has some substance to it. Keep up the good work!

I've been reading your other story, 'The Bet' and thought I'd check out this one as well. I love it and am sad to see that it is so short, but crossing my fingers that it is updated regularly. I don't know which one I'd rather you update first, but I hope you get more reviews, I must admit that I am biased, with only reading stories that have a fair amount of reviews. Can't wait to see what happens though, I am liking it so far.

i love this story so far! its a good laugh and the plot makes it even more entertaining. Hopefully at some point Hailey will believe her ..even tho she's a bitch most of the time so it doesn't even matter...update son pleasee)

-kay gee

wow! i really like this story! great job and update soon!

aw, that's sweet that she offered to kill him for her, lol.

does chance like her or something? omg, love triangle! hahaa.

(yeah, i tend to go on about things sometimes, ill try not to)

but anyways, it was obvious mark didnt like hailey that much anymore.

and ANYWAYS, awesome chapter, cant wait for moree :]]

Right. So I still don't get why Mark even got with Hailey in the first place, if she's such a bitch. And why is her sister ALL OF A SUDDEN so friendly? I mean...there seems to be no real reason for it. Otherwise, well done. The fact I'm criticizing you on like, plot stuff shows that I have nothing to say about your writing because it's so good. xP

I think she should end up with Chance. He's way cooler than Mark, who must be stupid for going out with Hailey!

xP I like your story. Please continue!

awesome story, written really good too.

chance seems really nice, i like him :]]

hailey is such a hoe, grr .

can't wait for more, keep up the great work

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I like this story a lot. Your chapters have a nice mix of narration and dialogue, something I admire since I'm still having trouble getting it down, and your chapters are very long, something I also have trouble with, xP. I also like the actual dialogue and how the plot is working, it seems like something I'd read in one of those 'teen' books, not something written by someone on fictionpress. Nice job.