Lol Layla and Alex was here! Great story, too bad it ending without me knowing if they really really like each other, but its ok, I still love this story:]

From the looks of the this and the first chapter, I am already loving this story!

NO! Really? I loved it, but...that's IT? *sigh* But, you are the writer. I wish you would have continued it though, but that is fine. I love it. :)

Oh! He is breaking his stony walls down for her! Yay! :) He sounds so cute. She IS lucky. But I wouldn't hate them if I was in the story...I'd be friends with them.

i need more... *sigh*

but i'm happy with the ending.

okay that ending was confusing. I was mad when I realized there's no next! Bah! BAH! What in the world just happened?

Yay this is an awesome story! I love it! It was short and a nice lttle reading experience(oh big word) *grins*

That is so cute! Aww, I want more!

Aww, I love the last part of that chapter!

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if you want cookiepiecookiepie i can give you a few ideas on how the story could go.i would write it myself but im not for reasons. your story and i dont want to steal it a better writer 3.i dont have enough time in my busy schedule to write by myself 4.i am content with just yeah reply or what ever

who the fuck are layla and alex? never mind, ill find out. i liked it. why did you end it so soon? it could have been a quest for daniel's first full sentence. yes i know that made no sense. this is why i like to read more than write.

is she a homophobe? if she is, can i shoot her? anyway. really good. i like where it is going. keep it up

how cute! i really like your characters and how you spend just enough time explaining things so the story can keep moving. really nice

how cute. he really likes her. it is really good. i can almost see the people coming off the page and walking around my house. it is really good so far.