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![]() ![]() ![]() This poem doesn't make a whole lot of sense, which is sad because it has a lot of really good images in it. "the spinning flash / of light developing" - very nice, original image. I'm proud. :D I like this a lot. "learn the lies we've / found refuge in" - this line is very poignant, possibly just because I can relate. It's not the most original, but brilliantly executed. I also like the idea of "grey notions". :) Very good. Your poems are very refreshingly original in this wasteland of crap that is fictionpress. -Jesse Attack of the review marathon! (link in profile) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "The spinning flash of light developing." Incredible imagery! There's also a deep sense of pain behind this line; I'm not sure why, but it's really captivated me :D! "Our grey notions..." Wow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing! I really like how the end finishes it up. wow. Well done :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "learn the lies we've found refuge in" nice lines and good poem:) |