Reviews for ma thewt am
LostInMe chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
"...to sate your jaunty, adolescent anomalies.

Were that you were a voyeur

and I the tiny keyhole you evanesce through –

the esoteric window, with all cracks..."

Great use of vocabulary!
Isca chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
"Let you pet my pretty mane." Creative! Great imagery!

"Adolescent anomalies." Nice alliteration!

"What do you see in the room beyond?" WOAH! That line completely caught me off-guard. It's brilliant! Philosophical! Profound! :D
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
:)

i like the way this is worded

very nice very nice how much :]

the fact that they are that significant to you makes me want to read them haha

this is really a pretty piece

i like it