|Reviews for ma thewt am|
| LostInMe chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
"...to sate your jaunty, adolescent anomalies.
Were that you were a voyeur
and I the tiny keyhole you evanesce through –
the esoteric window, with all cracks..."
Great use of vocabulary!
| Isca chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
"Let you pet my pretty mane." Creative! Great imagery!
"Adolescent anomalies." Nice alliteration!
"What do you see in the room beyond?" WOAH! That line completely caught me off-guard. It's brilliant! Philosophical! Profound! :D
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
i like the way this is worded
very nice very nice how much :]
the fact that they are that significant to you makes me want to read them haha
this is really a pretty piece
i like it