Oh my god, It's all gonna come out soon! Its heading to the climax! Gah, its so exciting!

I nodded. "It is my home no longer, anyway,"

I kind of would've liked to see her say "It was never my home," or something like that!

Well, hurry up and update, I'm more excited for the next chapter than this chapter!

Oh my gosh, this chapter and the last one were fantastic! Please update

Ooh fog, curses, and spectres, this seems like my type of story. You're a good writer and it seems I can't stop reading. It almost reminds me of Jane Eyre for a reason, though your plot and characters are extremely different. Ah, I just love that book and I think I'm loving this one as well.

Off to the next chapter!

Hello there!

Well, I think this is only my second review for I forgot I had an account on this site. I love these type of stories and your style is eloquent and refreshing. Your main character is charming and she seems like she'll be interesting to read about.

Great job!

~Mistress of Words

Well, that was might intriguing.

I think I've figured it out though!

Charles Wainwright was in the same position that Alphonse was in, and Wren was his Faerie. She gave him hope to continue living, just like she wants Faerie to do to Alphonse.

My other theory that I've had all along is that the Morgensterns, all the ones that are in the story now, set the curse on the Wainwrights many many years ago. They're immortal [possibly through vampirism? :/] and they've been living this whole time.

A branch off of that theory: Wren fell in love with Charles and wants to break the curse from them?

I think it's awful how Faerie has no one to trust. Everywhere she turns, there's someone betraying her again. First Charles [that scene was pretty intense, why does she belong to him?] harasses her, then she turns around and sees Greer wearing her necklace. The only person she can trust is Alphonse, but he might die.

Oh sad, tragic life...

Update soon, this is so good!

BTW: you should have a love scene ;) Alphonse and Faerie? huh huh huh? Yeah!

heck yeah! i'm so glad they feel the same way about each other, this is one of my favorite stories on this entire site, i love how i can just picture everything that's happening. Wonderful writing! Great job :]

i haven't been able to read this story in awhile but i just read all the ones i missed. I have to say that i'm totally in love here..excellent chapters! I'm going to start reviewing them as i read them. Great job! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Ah how sad. Poor thing. It's such an intriguing

story, but so sad at the same time. Sighs...

Well please keep writing for your reader's

sanity! Lol.

KC

So I am absoutly in love with this story!

Just thought I'd let you know ;)

Very good!

I hope Alphonse loses his mask at the masquerade!

And the Morgensterns see him, or he sees the Morgensterns, or both and oh my I just want scandal!

It was inevitable for Faerie to fall in love with Alphonse, but I thought from the beginning it was going to be Prince.

Oh, I'm sorry, I missed this chapter! My, I feel embarassed now!

Everything makes more sense now that I've read it. I must've skipped the alert in my inbox, I am reading way to many stories to keep track of...

God, that ruby necklace thing is creepy! And Alphonse seems kind of creepy to me. Sickly skeletal almost. Not attractive xp

I start to mistrust Charles, then he does something like what he did to Faerie in the dining room, and I can't help but want him to really like Faerie, whether Faerie likes him back or not.

God, this story is wonderful, so many mysteries, so many cliffhangers, the edge of my seat is getting worn!

What happened to Faerie going back to London though?

Please update, please this is really good

Just when I've thought I've escaped from my loneliness, or at least the knowledge of it that haunted me, I'm suddenly reminded of the empty feeling through Fae. [sigh, eyes downcast]

Well, since my mind is being flooded with such depressing thoughts, drowning the other things I thought of this chapter, I'll just end this review here and leave it to a "good job. :)".

'Til the next chapter.

Flawed Humanity.

Some of the names you used are not historically accurate. This drags onm sometimes, and I am strongly reminded of the Twilight series. Interesting, yet I can already predict the ending.