Reviews for The Line
Mark Piersley chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
I love this poem, it has everything one could expect.

The imagery of the knights is like an old battle, love it.

My favorite line "what a balancing act it has become"

I actually want to use the last four lines as an opening quote for my story "Premonitions of the Past" actually called The Last Crystal. With permission, of course.