oh please oh please update this story! i don't understand why there are so few reviews, but it's really pretty interesting. i can't wait to find out what happens next!

what happened to jacob's forehead? i wonder what kind of person pamela's dad is. also, there's one thing that doesn't make sense. in the beginning, pam was in her room when jacob came home. she locked the door because she was suddenly reminded of her dad's drinking and bringing different women home... from that, i thought maybe her dad had beat her or something. some reason that would create her fear. but, then pamela said she and her dad practically ignored each other and there was no fear? how is she standing up to jacob if she was afraid before?

Nice chapter, and your new title suits it more too. I wish I was good at titles, I suck at them. xP

He hit her? What kind of a guy would hit her? (

that was pretty good! please update soon and make the chapters slightly longer! :D

HaTeFuL LoViNg

Exciting suspense! Can't wait to read more.

Selling drugs door to door? O.O

What I enjoy the best about your stories is the way the conversations between the characters flow. Mostly it reminds me of the conversations we have, especially the 'whateva' part, seeing as that's my speciality.

Nonetheless, it's still fantastic and I'm hoping to read more. I still envy the fact that you continue to upate, whereas I'm stuck with a blimmin, writers block!

So... yeah, great chapters, update soon.

Tecna ;)

Nice chapter, I'm eager to read what happens next. The title of your story is a bit strangeish though.

this author is obviously going to be a great hit one day

very well written, well done.

love it love it love it cant wait 2 read da rest of it!

Besides my inherent bias against the name 'Pam', this story is pretty cool so far. Lots of questions left unanswered. xP

Slow-moving, but intriguing. I'll be back.

i like this story very much so far. Please update soon!