I get that some kids got involved in some kind of science-y mish-mash of crap and turned into superheroes (oh cliches!), but beyond that...I'm not entirely certain why Kara is being stressy. Unless she's trying to deny her powers?

Hmmeh, again, you seem to keep setting at a bare minimum. Which isn't too big a problem, seeing as you're putting more concentration into driving the plot, but it's always nice to have little details mentioned.

I haven't got a lot to say really xD. Except that, despite the oh-so-cliched-science-experiment-gone-wrong-y beginning, this is quite absorbing. Yis, I'll alert it .

I'm quite a critical reviewer, so I do hope you don't take criticism to heart :).

I liked how we were thrown straight into the story. However, I think you kind of skipped out on setting quite a lot. Maybe it's just me, but I'd say that demolishing a laboratory is a pretty dramatic thing to happen, and I felt that the setting wasn't described on par with the action :).

So basically...more setting...

"“Touch me,” he tells her. This, Mariam looks at askance." - I laughed so much at that. I'm sure I'm not the only pervert.

"In the next second the concrete lot is empty again, smoke quietly entering the sky." - I really, really loved that line.