I honestly love your story. It's very intriguing and each chapter leaves me guessing, which I personally love. The 1st person perspective helps enhance the curiosity that sparks every time the story progresses. Keep it coming! You're writing is beyond amazing!

Hey, I'm one of your newer readers. I found your story on Project Fiction and it sounded good so I started reading it. I've never read it before (the other version) so I can't tell if this version is better or not, but I can tell you that this version is really good. It's a little confusing sometimes but it's still at the beginning of the story and I can tell something big is going to happen. I'm starting to peice things together now. Like, is Brian the Black Knight? Cause Drake said he left when Midnight was attacked and didn't see him again until after the Black Knight had flew off.

So, anyway. This story is really amazing and I can't wait to read more. I hope you update soon. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :D

This story is so fascinating and intriguing. Your ideas are refreshingly original, and I can't wait to find out the connections between Dusk, Midnight, Brian, and the Black Knight!

ah that was so excting

and such an awesome chapter

poor midnight, red eyes sounds scary

quick question because I don't remember but does she like Darke? idk, but i just found it out she was in Drake's arms

This story is so amazing, so intriguing. I'm dying to know who the Black Knight is, and what his ties are to Dusk and Midnight. And why Brian keeps creeping on her...kidding.

But really! It's awesome. I found myself checking this story often even when you hadn't updated for months. Thanks for posting again!

that was very good!

but kinda of sad to me with the whole dusk/dark knight thing

don't know why, it just felt sad.

but it was wonderful!

i can't wait to read more!

This is so good! Please update again soon! There are so many aspects in this story that are so interesting and I'm so addicted now.

I really like this story! It has a really cool plot and I would love for you you to update it soon.

I haven't read the Old version so this is really interesting to me. I can't wait to read the next chapter. :]

~AsianStar

Oh how I have missed this story! It is different but it's still fantastic! :)

very good chapter please keep writing! I read you first version and I can't wait to see what you do with this one.

Keep up the good work and I hope inspiration finds you ready.

hey, (I haven't ever written a review before, not sure what you usually recive! Here goes)

you know when you pick up a really good book, and you can not put it down for the life of you, and crave the sequals? ...I'm addicted and desperate for more!

Your plot line and writting style are out of other internet stories leauges to me atm, I was a little skeptical of the superman/dark knight, but your winning me over..careful its not too predictable and doesn't get cheesy!

totaly original, different from the usual blah blah blah- a bit of excitment that doesn't yet involve any reference to twilight or labels-which drives me to insanity!

A new world, keep writting please you got me hooked as I'm sure many others are:)

Raine X

This story is amazing! I cannot wait to read more!

Hey, I'm someone who read the old version of this story, and I must say that so far I like this one. I did enjoy some things more from the older version, and I hope you keep some of those things.

Now I have a few questions about Dusk, my favorite of all the super heros of this story. Will she ever return? And if she does, will Midnight be freaked out? Or not even know what is going on?

Anyhoo, I look forward to read more of this story, and your other now. :D Keep up the good work!

Really great story..

Your plots are so original. And you're exceptionally good at creating and describing a universe.

I love Immortal Sapphire. And I'm starting to love this just as much.

Reading this proved to me that the quality of your writing is very consistent. And its certainly not like an amateurs.

I've become your fan.

Hope this gets its due attention.

Cheers,

Winged Unicorn

I've been following this story since Quizilla and i like how most of it is changed up. Is Midnight still going to be a masked vigilante though, that was one part that I really enjoyed & thought was different. Great writing though! Can't wait for more installments :D