Reviews for From a Distance
Landcaster chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
I can deeply relate to this. Being a senior, all of the goodbyes and regrets hang heavy, and all the semi-friends, or vague acquaintances seem like lost opportunities. I really liked this poem. Stylistically, I like how you dragged it out, I'm not sure if this was on purpose, but it made suited the tone of the poem, as time drags on by. Also the reuse of the word never hammers home the theme quite well.
wordsofjade chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
Wow, this is really good! I love the imagery it depicts almost like a movie in my mind and I can feel the emotions of it. Luv it, great job! :)
teppygirl chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
Jane, what is it with you and angst? Jeez, right something happy for once! Nah, but it was a good poem anyway.
The Tragedian chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
I like it. Good dilation.

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