Reviews for Unpopularity
Cenobite829 chapter 4 . 6/19/2012
I was all cool with every other song you used except for the horrific cover that is John Mayer's Free Fallin'. Go for the original by Tom Petty and the Heartbreakers. That one is much better.
Rosedreamer101 chapter 22 . 10/29/2011
aww great story :)
XshadowxdemonX chapter 4 . 6/14/2011
Free fallin is by Tom Petty
WritingWithChocolate chapter 1 . 3/14/2010

I just finished the prologue (not much time :[ But I'll get to the rest tomorrow, hopefully). It was short, but it gave me a lot of information, so plus!

The second sentence sounds a bit run-on-y to me. Maybe try changing it to something like "My father was a pretty wealthy doctor before he died. Of course, he left us some money, but that wasn't as important to our family."

Also, I don't think you need the excessive exclamation points at the end.

Other than that, I love the whole idea of the story (I'm a sucker for cliches XD).
3DarkGoddess3 chapter 21 . 12/28/2009
Really sweet I feel bad for Adam, he is a sweety.
Writing Reality chapter 21 . 12/22/2009

Love it!

ahah you should have made it M though :)


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threm chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
pretty monotonous start/
theRaven'sDesk chapter 21 . 7/11/2009
I really liked your story. It was a great story line, but it probably could have had some more detail, it felt really rushed. It was good though. keep it up
emily chapter 13 . 6/17/2009
HelloFasination chapter 21 . 5/31/2009
omg i love ur story

its so good

Aw worthy :)

plz put character pix up
HelloLovely chapter 2 . 5/26/2009
Hey, I think the storyline is good, but the grammar of the story needs a little work. Mostly when people are talking. You tend to have them talk in run on sentences with no breath.


Girlwithideas chapter 21 . 5/25/2009
so cute!
LaMeO1 chapter 21 . 5/25/2009
that was really cute!

post an epilogue please!
Kiri Hanna chapter 21 . 5/25/2009
loved the story. I just wish Candace got what she deserved. Hate that bitch!
hostilitywolf chapter 21 . 5/25/2009
aw! this is such a cute story!
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