This story is awesome especially their names

Peregrine falcon lollll?! I loved your story. Absolutely hilarious! Thank you for sharing your story with us :)

This is actually funnyyyyyyyyyyy I love this it's light-hearted 3

Absolutely loved it!

This is a great story it has humour strangeness and a whole load of other stuff

They all got really great names haha Eh Brandon name was I would call weirdest xD

i officially freaking worship you. this fic was so bloody funny i applaud you bro!

Love it .. I have tears in my eyes from laughing
It was super funny. :D

Gone with the Wind is my favorite book of all time OMG! And I love all of your stories, they're all so well-written

Kinda reminds me of my own family but without the names.

Adorable! You totally caught me with Bob, I mean really, Bob? Poor kid ;)

Brandon's the sort of guy I would hate in real life. He's kind of a jerk.

OMG I LOVE THIS! I LOVE EVERYONE'S NAMES AND I LOVE THE CHARACTERS AND I LOVE EVERYTHING! AHHHHHHHHH FANGIRL SQUEALING HAS COMMENCED
This is amazing and I think it's such a shame that you've outgrown FP and probably won't be coming back to these awesome characters! But I'm so glad you posted this before you left!

Really nice one-liners. I really thought that the boyfriend would turn out to be a jerk, but you really pulled him together and wound him into a - gasp - nice guy. Lettie is very easy to relate with, and I think this one-shot is really uplifting. Keep writing 3

Hey there! I'm Rosie from a site called A Drop of Romeo and I'm happy to say that your story has been added to our archive, under the category of One Shot! Here's your review:
Rosie Thinks: This story just reminds me of those overprotective older brother stories, except on speed - Lettie has ten siblings, five of which are overprotective, older brothers. She rightly refers to them all as a 'circus'! Lettie has always had a crush on Brandon, but has been too scared of her circus of a family to do anything about it. When he makes the moves on her, however, she can't resist. She still tries harder than anything to keep him from meeting the other 14 members of her family! This makes for lots of hilarious encounters as Lettie struggles to keep Brandon from realising just how mental her family is.

There are a huge amount of characters for just a one shot (since there are so many people in the family, of course) but I really liked how Quill-and-Blood didn't try to info dump them on the reader. Probably my favourite part in the story was the names of the characters - that part will definitely be staying with me for a long time! The whole story is cliche, but so wonderfully original with the huge family. I honestly would love to read side-stories about the entire family, they seem so hilarious. Brandon was also a bit different from the other love interests you see - he was definitely incorrigible, but still loveable. 'Meet the Sheldricks' was completely hilarious and definitely stands out for me.