|Reviews for weeding cleo|
| Isca chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
"Visceral penumbrance, proletariat." Brilliant diction! I love the comparison between a sort of natural shadow to a common-person. It also ties a lot of Sociology into this poem, by referencing Marx. I like how this part connects to the ending, with "Freedman's tongue." :D!
| gg. lass chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
the wording in this is interesting.
im gonna hv to read it a few more times.
yours until the wind changes,