|Reviews for Shards of Glass|
| chyunine chapter 2 . 7/15/2009
Well, this sounds interesting, and I will definitely keep an eye on this. Keep writing and update soon!
That prophecy in the first chapter, did you make that up or did you find that somewhere? If you did indeed make it up, I have to say, I'm pretty impressed with your whole rhyme scheme and how much it actually sounds like a prophecy, if not, where did you get it?
| Helizabeth chapter 2 . 1/2/2009
feeding off of fear...sounds like Lord Loss. interesting. my ankle hurts right now. maybe there's a horrible monster trying to kill me! yay! wait, that would be bad. but cool!
| Helizabeth chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
I must read more.
| Ray-Anne chapter 2 . 12/27/2008
I'm curious as to why the prophecy changed rhyming counts in the midst of it? Only curious, you were o Rhyming scale (You know what that is yes?) then you changed t At the end...only curious of why? I didn't understand the affect.
I'm slightly interested by the beginning though, it has a hook, but it is rather vague...in some ways that could be seen as very good.