|Reviews for Richard's Lot|
| Sushi - sunrise19live.com chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
Well, I liked it. And I like the little shout out to Elizabeth Browning (Or Roger Rabbit, but I'm going with Browning). Verah Nyce.
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
I like the meaning of this a lot. It's so raw and true, I can just hear a guy talking.
But that has a bad side, too. The tone and wording is very plain and converstational, which makes this a bit plain as a poem. Maybe spice up the wording a bit?
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