Reviews for Relapse, Rewind, Repeat
sundayguts chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
403 Forbidden chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
This is very intense, I like the "(rinse and) Repeat," part because it had a sort of ad nauseum feel to it. Very...raw, overall, i would say, especially the "carved into me" part.

GirlWithTheBrokenSmile chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
I like it:) Beautifully written.

Write on!
LostInMe chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
The length of this poem appeals to me - not long at all, but not so short that it doesn't contain enough to judge - as well as the way all the individual lines are of similar (but not too similar) length.
Chasing Skylines chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Wow, it's like the narrator has convinced him/herself that this is a process, and might as well just 'relapse' over and over again. I liked the way you conveyed that through the "3 R's."

seeings as it's carved into me.

Just seeing. No s.

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