Reviews for Carousel
The Candle Thief chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
I liked the how you used the short stanzas in this poem, and your use of words made me feel like I was really wheeling around on a carousel, because it was so short and quick, but well-rounded at the same time. I also liked how you bolded some words, and then bolded and italicized others to hint at an even deeper meaning. Nicely done. :D

-Ramen
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
This is a great poem. Simple but well constructed and true. Write on!

Anna _