|Reviews for run away|
| Jesse the Storyteller chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
You did a good job of how anytime in this poem that the word "i" occurred, you separated it somehow. It helps to show that the poem is all about "i". :) Great job.
You also have some interesting images here, like "colour myself / into another lifeline" and "sea implications" and "the strangling / half notion you had of me." All are freshly original and clever. Great job working with the words! :)
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| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Interesting piece. I felt like I wanted a bit more to it, but it's good as it is. Keep writing.