Reviews for being hopeful
Isca chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Oh God. This was short, but so incredibly beautiful! :D

"She held the dying star in her hands." Lovely :D
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Haha, reminds me of Howl's Moving Castle. I like that :)

Wow, the "real meaning?" The things that the "star" could possibly be are endless. The sun, the earth, a person, a career/future . . . Nice ambiguity with that, though.

I also like how simple this is. It says so much with so little.

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Jesse the Storyteller chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Aw, I like this. It's very simple, sad, and cute.

The line in italics at the end, is it supposed to be part of the poem? 'Cause the line sets it off to make me think it's an A/N. I think if you got rid of the line, it would help resolve a lot of confusion.

I like how you didn't use any punctuation or capitalization in this poem. In most other poems, it doesn't work. But for the quiet simplicity of this poem, it works wonderfully. Good job. :)


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Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Wow very sad and quite a pessimistic view. Very powerful piece. Keep writing.

~Anna~ _