|Reviews for what do you see?|
| Isca chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Unique structure. Very creative! :)
"So when I look at my reflection on windows, it scares me now
that I'm always almost invisible." Brilliant imagery! Chilling! Sad!
| SomeoneToLove chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
wow, I love the last line, it has such an impact and was such a great idea! Well done :)
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
[words/that won't make sense.] The stanza break was strange. It was right in the middle of a thought.
I really like the end, though. It sort of answers the title, and wraps your ideas up nicely.
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