Unique structure. Very creative! :)

"So when I look at my reflection on windows, it scares me now

that I'm always almost invisible." Brilliant imagery! Chilling! Sad!

wow, I love the last line, it has such an impact and was such a great idea! Well done :)

[words/that won't make sense.] The stanza break was strange. It was right in the middle of a thought.

I really like the end, though. It sort of answers the title, and wraps your ideas up nicely.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)