Reviews for The Devil's Deal
Lazy Me chapter 7 . 6/21/2016
I'm going to be honest here... I was really hoping for a happy ending regardless of all indications otherwise.
Zeela chapter 7 . 4/6/2016
This is so sad. The ending. I hate lucii. But this is so fit.. F**** I dunno what to think. What a story.
ice.labyrinth chapter 7 . 12/30/2013
Okay so let me just say that I have not cried for a long time now and this did a number on me, but even after I finished reading this sad story, I went back and kept on rereading it even though I know I'll cry-it was just that amazing. I loved the scene where she and her little brother were watching that movie and it was really sweet, but foreshadowing. I absolutely loved how the Devil was portrayed here and it feels like a breath of fresh air because the story makes the Devil frightening, evil, and overall a total butthead. I. Loved. It. I woke up almost my entire family because I was reading this at 4 in the morning and I don't care I woke them up because the emotional roller coaster I had just went through was so freaking amazing. Your writing style is golden and it's perfect for stories like this. The last chapter hurt(emphasis on that 't'). It had an ominous, but accepting feeling to it. The facts for her death were simplistic but emotional in a way and let me tell you something: I felt so freaking connected to Jennifer's character and personality and it felt like I knew everything little thing about her. That's hard to do in just 7 chapters and I find it amazing that you were able to do that.

I haven't written a review in a long time, so I'm sorry if this one sucks, but I started reading this story thinking it would be like the ones I've read so far. I was obviously proven wrong and I'm really glad that I've read this. I hope you continue writing in the future! :)
Belly boo1099 chapter 7 . 11/11/2013
Aww! It got really depressing near the last two capters of this story :(
OPatron chapter 7 . 3/17/2013
woahhhhh this was rather good! a bit dark, but still very well written. good job!
The Phoenix Girl chapter 7 . 8/3/2012
Great story... Very special and unique :)
cheesecake15 chapter 7 . 4/23/2011
My golly gosh, your story is excellent, honestly. Very moving, the last chapter especially. Well done, a very unique story.

. xx .
DorkExpress chapter 7 . 4/11/2011
Oh... goodness... wow!

he really did a number on her didn't he?

Wow... great story.

Meow X chapter 7 . 2/22/2011
I read this story long ago and I happened to came across it again so I decided to reread it and boy am I happy I did!

Fantastic work mate. I love your writing style and how you made everything flow. Ending was sad :( but I wouldn't want to have it any other way. It would have been way too cliche if he had fallen in love with her. Anyway, awesome job and keep up the great work!
Kura-sama chapter 7 . 2/9/2011
I wonder if everything is just a plot to get her to kill herself, since that was his goal from the beginning and he didn't even hide it. If it's all a plot for her to kill herself, is everything with her brother real? Did he actually have a contract with her brother or is he just manipulating her? Is her brother going to survive now that her death is guaranteed? I'm so curious~

Wonderful story though, love that it can be interpreted in different ways. Ambiguous yet definite at the same time. Very well written.
Juliana Rain chapter 7 . 1/30/2011
I LOVED THE ENDING! With all the **A fact about my deaths** I really loved the last one. I swear if I hadn't gotten used to suck sad stories I would have teared up maybe even cried. :)

Very nice.
Bipolarised chapter 7 . 1/7/2011
i liked it, although a lot of unanswered questions, but i guess it makes you think about what happened and piece it together. it was really good, great work!
obscene.blonde chapter 3 . 8/17/2010
His last name isn't morningstar :) it MEANS morningstar... Your story is really good. :) I like smiley faces :)
LittleMissMurdered chapter 7 . 6/1/2010
Very, very, very enticing. The plot is really unique and the breaks in between chapters were torture! D: I love the characters and how everything ties together in one big confusing jumble. (I'm still confused about some things if you haven't guessed.) Amazing! I loved it and it was really well written. Kudos!
becca7193 chapter 7 . 4/18/2010
wow i really believed the devil loved her for a min brill writing!
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