Reviews for The Devil's Deal
CutieSOS chapter 3 . 1/7/2009
great chapter and story

i cant wait to read the next one

keep up the good work
HighwaytoInsanity.xx chapter 3 . 1/7/2009
Wow, once again- amazing! Aww poor Lucifer :(, yup, you've actually got me feeling sorry for the devil *shudders*

Seriously amazing- wow...

jaimebby chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
So I wanted to add an afterthought, but it wouldn't let me review again.

Anyway, I read your author's notes. If you do change the story up according to the reviews, would you also post the original ending? I would love that, whether it ends the way we like it or not. :-D

I love your writing.
jaimebby chapter 2 . 1/4/2009

rainhailsnow chapter 2 . 1/3/2009
lol at the amount of cursing that you've incorporated into two chapters! i really find the concept you're using for your story really fascinating and original ) good job on the portrayal of Lucifer!

can't wait for the next chapter! update soon!
The Paranoia Kids chapter 2 . 1/2/2009
Holy crap. Now you've got me wishing the Devil would just friggen appear in my bedroom.

Update soon and uh, Happy (belated) New Year!
CutieSOS chapter 2 . 1/2/2009
freakin awsome
HighwaytoInsanity.xx chapter 2 . 1/2/2009
Hell, this is good, you have me completely hooked! Please update as I am absolutely LOVING this! Wow Lucifer is... *faints*



The Paranoia Kids chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Nice. Update soon.
SassyCassie chapter 1 . 12/28/2008

well I think your story is very interesting. I can't wait to read more. Now about the ending, I personally like happy endings because ther is too much sadness in the world today. But it really is up to you on how the story should end. Once again great story.

Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
cant wait for more

hope you update soon
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