Reviews for Garden of Cradles
Ray-Anne chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
The pieces in bold would almost be better if they had a paragraph (short sentence even) to help either explain their significance in that moment or some such...because they felt quite random sometimes and I couldn't concentrate on them and I treated them as random interjection even though they were quite provocative for thoughts.

It was interesting, but not much to hook in for the first bit...vaguely curious of what the story will become.

(Sorry for stalking all your works, I just like once I've read one piece by the author read the others, especially with your style)