| Reviews for The Unseen |
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   xMoose chapter 26 . 1/31/2009 oh dear god. i just wanna steal alex :) alright, chapter review. it was grand. you really did a great job. it's amazing to see how far you've come in such a short time. |
| ncEDGE chapter 26 . 1/30/2009 WHAT? WHAT? WHAT HAPPENED? WHY IS ASHLYN SO CRAZY? WHAT HAPPENED TO SIERRA? o dear so many questions... o and sry this took so long. i never thought exams were so time consuming... but WHAT? WHAT? ugh ok im gonna need an update to get over this one... :( haha |
| Inactive453627 chapter 26 . 1/30/2009 Is Sierra gone too? No! Ashlyn has to go down, and soon! I'm excited for the Belle/Alex chapter, I love their chemistry. Update soon, I'm still in love with this story :) |
| GaIn chapter 26 . 1/29/2009 Thank goodness Alex showed up. This keeps getting better and better. Things are getting really intense! |
| ncEDGE chapter 25 . 1/28/2009 YOU CANT JUST DO THAT TO A PERSON! Is sarah ok? well obviously not, but COME ON! She might not be totally dead. Maybe... SHE WAS IN A CAR CRASH, but she LIVED and is now in terrible pain BUT THE POINT IS that she LIVED! So ahlyn's plan is RUINED! o wow, u have to update quickly! And yes i do have a mild obsession with ALL. CAPS. LOCK. Haha ok GREAT JOB! :D |
| Inactive453627 chapter 25 . 1/28/2009 Agck! You ca't post such a small chapter and get my hopes up like that! Now I need to know things, like what happened to Sarah, and why Sierra is still okay. Update soon, I'm dying! |
| Vici Daily chapter 25 . 1/27/2009 ...WHAT! I'm speechless. I can't even say it was a good chapter...there was no chapter! D Sarah? Oh no...update soon! So it is only Belle and Sierra left? ( ~Angela |
| GaIn chapter 25 . 1/27/2009 Ah. Short, but super good. I don't mind the length. |
| xMoose chapter 25 . 1/27/2009 the shortness of this chapter always gets me. it's so powerful and in-dept in a way. yes, i know i'm weird. but the simplicity, is over-powering. in short, this is good, no matter how short, cuz that makes it even better. |
| xMoose chapter 13 . 1/27/2009 aw! poor belle. but you did a good job with writing the ritual. lol i've been talking more about the characters than how you write them...tis a good thing, i say! |
| xMoose chapter 12 . 1/27/2009 ya know...once in a while it'd be nice to have the klik as friends...or maybe on second thought, cuz considering the ending, not such a hot idea. but still, "nice" of them to shower belle with gifts. |
| xMoose chapter 11 . 1/27/2009 i wish they hadn't left early and that they kissed. dang it. poopy alex and belle. i wonder how things would have changed if they had. LOL. ROBBIE. no! |
| xMoose chapter 10 . 1/27/2009 this was a short one. oh well. love the chapter title. cutee. |
| xMoose chapter 9 . 1/27/2009 more like UNINVITED! ahh, creepy movie. anyways. they are seriously annoying. hate them. the klik i mean. KLITORIS! erm, yeah. alex and belle are cute. |
| xMoose chapter 8 . 1/27/2009 party, party. fun, fun. lol, nice chapter title. this was a good one, but nothing compared to the future chapters. |