Reviews for The Unseen
xMoose chapter 7 . 1/27/2009
sierra's such a nice friend :)

RED LOBSTER, haven't been there in a while.

maybe i should go with 'whats-his-face'? haha.

that would be interesting.
xMoose chapter 6 . 1/27/2009
m, i really need to HIRE alex to be my chauffer. wouldn't that lovely? HEY! we carpool don't we? lmao, imagine showing up to school with alex on our arms...those jaws dropping. *sigh*

anyways, good job with this chapter.

alex is certainly a character. and so is belle.
xMoose chapter 5 . 1/27/2009
yeah, i already hate the klik. bitches.
xMoose chapter 4 . 1/27/2009
lol, the memorable match! ha! anyways, i remember this chapter - when i completely loved alex - that is before robbie came - and now went. haha. amazing how this story just took off. it's fun though!
xMoose chapter 3 . 1/27/2009
question: how did you get the name and idea for the 'klik'?
xMoose chapter 2 . 1/27/2009
realized that i didn't review a couple, or actually a ton of chapters in between. sorry.

really like how this kinda got everything going and settled at the same time for belle.
grassong chapter 24 . 1/25/2009
O.O INTENSE! oh i think im gonna be frikin scared in the next couple chapters xD hahahaa good job:]
Vici Daily chapter 24 . 1/25/2009
( ( ( i feel so sorry for the girls...update soon though! I can't wait to find out what they are going to do next...with ashlyn and all...~Angela
ncEDGE chapter 24 . 1/25/2009
! This was so intense! So rebeccas dead now. lovely, just lovely. now belles next. And poor alex... he should go and grab ashlyn and bring her into the public b/c if i was her, i would NOT be going anywhere they asked me to. Great job and update soon!
GaIn chapter 24 . 1/25/2009
I loved the last line. Can't wait to see what the confrontation with Ashlyn will be like. And thanks for updating this story so quickly! I (and everyone else, probably) really appreciate it!
Inactive453627 chapter 24 . 1/25/2009
I hope they get Ashlyn back, she deserves to go down. This story almost reminds me of Pretty Little Devils, one of my favorite mystery/slashers of all time. I can't wait for more, once again you leave me on the edge of my seat :)
Inactive453627 chapter 23 . 1/24/2009
Oh my God! I can't believe Tyra's dead. Sorry for not reviewing sooner, I've been deprived of a computer for two days now. This was a great chapter, now I want to know who goes next! I can't wait for the intrigue, it should be amazing. I'm definitely not bored :)
xMoose chapter 23 . 1/24/2009
so sad (

good job though!
Vici Daily chapter 23 . 1/24/2009
Oh, very good...but at the end up the chapter, the last word to be exact, wasn't that name supposed to be sarah, not sierra?

“Don’t be,” he stroked my hair for a moment longer until people began filing in, and then he left me to go to his seat. Sarah took her seat next to me a moment later. We didn’t talk or even look at each other the whole hour.

Then, when the bell rang at the end of the period, she grabbed my arm before I could get up. “Belle, I’m sorry.”

I tried to smile at her, but it was hard. I hadn’t smiled in days. My anger had passed, and I felt guilty and a little ashamed at my outburst. “Don’t worry about it, Sierra.”

...anyway, just thought id ask, but GREAT chapter! I can't wait for the next one and to find out what happens! Update soon...~Angela
ncEDGE chapter 23 . 1/24/2009
Aw no. She can't die! I think ahslyn did this, in some sick twisted way... And poor Belle. AW its so sad.

not to be heartless but GREAT JOB! haha. and what is this was robbie popping back up? is he really a good guy? did he not just want to get into belle's pants...? the question remanins... haha
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