Reviews for The Unseen
GaIn chapter 23 . 1/24/2009
Another intense chapter! This just keeps getting better and better. No concrit here. Can't wait for more!
Vici Daily chapter 22 . 1/21/2009
lol, oh, I've seen worse! D My sister...oh I won't even get into it ..lol great chapter! I love the chemistry between Alex and Belle! Hm I wonder whatsa gonna happen next? Update soon! ~Angela
GaIn chapter 22 . 1/21/2009
Ah, how sweet. But now I'm wondering if Robbie really really liked her after all. Good chapter. Loved it.
xMoose chapter 22 . 1/21/2009
woo! fyi, make sure you change chapter 18 to chapter 19. got me a little confused.

i love how you post a bunch of chapters. you are a very nice author. haha. i really like these chapters, even though robbie has to go. i remember when alex was the obsession before robbie was even in the picture. but he was fun while he lasted.

ah, things just get better from here, well, i mean that both sarcastically and literally, if you know what i mean.

i think i'm back to alex now. ALEX, ROBBIE? alex
Inactive453627 chapter 22 . 1/21/2009
Yes! Finally! The moment has come! I'm so glad she got rid of Robbie and kissed Alex, it was about time. Oh, and just wondering, is the Alex in the story based off Alex Pettyfer? His looks seem to remind me of him, and I noticed the picture on your profile page. Just an observation. I loved it, can't wait for more!
ncEDGE chapter 22 . 1/21/2009
WOT! Finally! Haha, u have no idea how long i've been waiting for that kiss! WOOT! Amazingly awesome job! Ok but now robbia has me confused... did he relaly like her? Like for real? Not just to get in her pants? Now i feel bad... POOR ROBBIE! Haha. Update! :D
ncEDGE chapter 21 . 1/21/2009
WO! Im so proud of them. haha. and YAY ALEX! I mean... cough. woot robbie... :/

Haha, sry, but im an alex girl through and through now. Whats gonna happen with that? Im a little scared that if she dumps robbie hes gonna do something bad... EEKK!

Ayway, great job as usual! And im so siked for the next update! :D
futureauthor852 chapter 21 . 1/20/2009
YES! They quit, their going to break up with the jerks, Alex and Belle...sigh. everything is how it should be! D ...but what goes up, must come down, right? I wonder what BAD thing (s) is going to happen now? UPDATE SOON! SERIOUSLY..AS IN NEXT MINUTE OR SOMETHING...of course you don't HAVE to, but... D lol anyways, love the chapter! ~Angela
Inactive453627 chapter 21 . 1/20/2009
I'm excited, the Klik is DONE. Well, for now at least. There has to be some drama left with that whole deal. So I can't wait for the decision chapter, that should be interesting. I hope Belle chooses the right guy, haha ;) Great chapter, keep it coming!
GaIn chapter 20 . 1/19/2009
Ah, Ashlyn is such a. . . evil person. But it's great that Sierra and Belle are finally coming to their senses and getting out of this. Poor Belle, especially after that whole purse thing. I'm not sure if I mentioned it last time, but you're very good at writing. And at developing characters.
Inactive453627 chapter 20 . 1/19/2009
Okay...that was really low. I should've expected it from Ashlyn, though. At least they're out, right? Great post, still looking forward to the rest!
ncEDGE chapter 20 . 1/19/2009
Ugh! Robbie is such a jerk sometimes. But i love this story... -sigh- haha. I feel so bad for belle, no clothes... i would call robbie or alex... and demand to wear some of their clothes. haha. omgosh SO GOOD! as usual. haha. update soon!
not-so-muggle chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Wow, this is so good. I'm automatically very interested. I'm going to go read the first chapter RIGHT NOW

-xxtwilightaddictxx

So the lion fell in love with the lamb...
xMoose chapter 20 . 1/19/2009
AH omg! okay, so you know my tendancy for spacing out? well, okay so i logged off my fictionpress and then i'm like i wanna read some of the unseen chapters over again. so i logged back again and went to your story to see that you added one more. so i comment. and then i have this strange feeling...so i go back and then i'm like OH SNAP. what the hell...so basically i had logged onto your account and commented your story. i am so sorry. i don't know if i should laugh or cry...but hey, on the brightside you get an extra review.

anyways, i think the solution is for you to change your password, so i can't log on and don't something horrible, like, idk...DELETE YOUR STORY. i don't think i would do that, but you know how i space out...alright, don't get me started.

but alright. sorry again.

and i liked this chapter if you couldn't tell from my...YOUR review.

hahaha. oh boy.
irunwithvampires3 chapter 20 . 1/19/2009
bitches. well, really. there's only one. and she needs to go die!
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