Reviews for The Unseen |
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![]() ![]() ![]() okay, I admit I DID laugh, BUT JUST A LITTLE! lol, it was kinda funny, but I seriously feel horrible for them, for Belle the most! LOL, update soon! I can't wait for more! ~Angela |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg freakin MTV haha that will be some show about her, alex barging in and everything...D I guess i shouldn't be laughing about it though P..anyway, GREAT chapter and I can't wait for more! More. More. more. more. more. more...~Angela |
![]() ![]() ![]() alright. this is actually mean for chp 18. it wouldn't lemme repeat the review. but GAH. no shirtless robbie! haha you knew my plan. and stopped it. dang you. ohh well. thanks again for the help! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I EFFING LOVE THIS CHAPTER! and not because i helped. haha. i bet you know the reason why. hehehehe. ohh robbie, dear. but you did great on this chapter - as always. it's just so much fun. i love this story! ooh yeah, baby. i'm review number thirty! i can't wait to see the see people's reaction when you post the rest of the chapters. *sigh* i'm so jealous at your amazingly fast writing skills, like insanely effing jealous. haha get it? anyways, it'll be a pleasure when you start on your next story. *wink wink* any whoo, i'll work on those pics! much love. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! Now I want to know what's between Alex and Robbie! I feel bad for Belle, Robbie's such a skeeze for doing that. I hope she dumps him, and soon. I'm excited that you finished it, the rest should be awesome. Can't wait for another update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Jeez, i practically screamed when i saw you posted a new chapter, and after reading it... i was screaming. haha. U FINSIHED IT! thats so cool. omgosh im so eager to read more. This chapter rocks, and MTV, freakin' MTV. hahahahah. GREAT JOB. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, very interesting. I love the characters and the plot is so original! Belle and Alex should be together. I bet Robbie really is using her. . . Anyway, good story. Can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well...so much for my thoery, lol, I guess Alex and Ariel are NOT going out and Robbie is using Belle...hm interesting! lol, I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon.! At least alex knowns now why Belle is mad...~Angela |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! She...likes? Alex again...she is going to...fight? for him back maybe? I can't wait to read the next chapter, I have to find out! Was Ashlyn's mood at the party about Rob and Alex? Did she...know? that Belle would want alex still? lol ~Angela |
![]() ![]() ![]() D Sorry I haven't reviewed for a while, I was extremely busy,...but...AWESOME chapter, and I can't wait to found out whether or not Belle will have something happen to her?, ect... ~Angela |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww! (again) i think alex has redeemed himself here for me, even though he kinda hurt belle. oh well. :) guess you couldn't stay away and resist posting another chapter. haha shame on you. maybe you should learn from me and become a tease. |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE TELL ME YOU'RE UPDATING SOON! This has to be my favorite story of all time. like no joke! And may i just say that i think alex is telling the truth, robbie is a playa, and alex needs to deck him. haha. OMG! im going to reread it! jeez, i read it so fast, i need to go back haha. well i love it and please please please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for posting! I love the tension, but I can't stand Alex looking like the bad guy! He's so nice, I just can't believe he's mean or anything. This was great, I'm glad Belle realized that Robbie was a jerk and believed Alex about it. Can't wait for the next bit, happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMGOODNESS! ok so im not done yet (obviously), but i just wanted to say that i love this story. the story line, the characters, and alex (haha) are all amazing! ok, well back to reading! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw. i was torn. robbie? alex? robbie? alex? this was good, great! robbie can be sucha...meaniepoo butthead? well, to put it lightly. and alex - always the gentlemen...which can be annoying. sometimes. but i like alex jealous. i love it. MUAHAHAHA. i think that's why i love robbie so much. THERE! i said it. I LOVE ROBBIE. go die alex. alright, alright. i'm OVERreacting a tad. i'm sorry alex..yer still my homie right? okay, enough talking to fictional characters. i guess this proves the point on how attached i'm to your characters. you have written them very well! until next time! |