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![]() ![]() ![]() Don't decide to wait NOW! I'm hooked! Alex is back in the picture, which makes me extremely happy, and I have to find out more. Post soon, and here's hoping you get more reviews! You definitely deserve them, this story is awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter, you have me on the edge of my computer chair! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey luv this story. it reli relates 2 real life n stuff. dere always da popular ppl in da school anywho hate da kilks. luv alex! he is soo gentleman. belle is stupid 2 let him go n let he so call "fwens ruing thier friendship she is stupid. sry i juss kinda insulted ur character but i relli dnt like her. well hope u update soon! Good luck writing! ~BlackRose1991 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Update! Wow, the Klik is getting pretty creepy. Rituals during a party? Ashlyn must be seriously into them to ditch an opportunity to be seen. Tension is growing between Robbie and Alex! It would be adorable if Alex fought for Belle, seriously cute. I loved this chapter, can't wait to find out what happens next! Keep it coming, it's awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this. second favorite chapter! and to think, the best is still yet to come! keep up the amazing work! the chp title should deff be cruel intentions. alrighty, off to dream about my two new favorite male characters...robbie boy alex poo! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahh sista fran! i hate you for not telling me you posted so many chapters. and i love you FOR posting all these chapters. funny how you posted chp 14 - the BEST ONE YET - the day i looked at it. this just made my day...night. ahh the memories! this is my favorite chapter at of all. well, you know, for now. all i can say is, in the words of rebecca, "smokin" ah. i love robbie and his red trunks! i think i'll be dreaming of robbie...and alex tonight. wo, woo. it's gonna be a party. alrighty now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, wow, I didn't think this could get much more complicated, but you managed it! Robbie seems like Evil Alex, and I think I just might love it. I'm liking the new direction this is taking, and I can't wait to read about the Halloween party! Update soon, I'm dying over here :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no...I like the new kid, but it he really hiding something? And i feel so sorry for slex (...hmpt, he had it coming though when he started to like someone in the klik. Update soon! and great chapter! D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh i can't wait for you to write the chapter with the party!That will be fun to read! Oh, and are they not going out? What if they Klik just told Belle that, but they really aren't? I'm confused! D Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww I feel so sorry for her! I honestly thought, though, that they were going to teepee Alex's house, not Seth's D..that would have been interesting! D lol Great chapter by the way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohh i feel so sorry for alex! I cna't wait for an update, i need to know what is going to happen next! D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh...at least she still has Alex though. What will she now, now that she knows about Sarah's mother? |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh...they better not ruin anything for her...I will hate them all forever! -dramatic fist pumped into the air- D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm still loving this, it's got all the elements of a great teen horror. Keep it up, it's really great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES! I'm so glad that they aren't going and the Belle still is. I hope Alex can talk some since into her before the sleepover friday, but I already know from your summary that that won't happen. sigh. where would the drama be though, right? D lol, anyway another great chapter and I can't wait for an update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again GREAT story and i can't wait for an update! |