Reviews for The Unseen
Inactive453627 chapter 17 . 1/15/2009
Don't decide to wait NOW! I'm hooked! Alex is back in the picture, which makes me extremely happy, and I have to find out more. Post soon, and here's hoping you get more reviews! You definitely deserve them, this story is awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter, you have me on the edge of my computer chair!
ValerieYoung chapter 16 . 1/13/2009
hey luv this story. it reli relates 2 real life n stuff. dere always da popular ppl in da school anywho hate da kilks. luv alex! he is soo gentleman. belle is stupid 2 let him go n let he so call "fwens ruing thier friendship she is stupid. sry i juss kinda insulted ur character but i relli dnt like her. well hope u update soon!

Good luck writing!

~BlackRose1991
Inactive453627 chapter 16 . 1/10/2009
Yay! Update! Wow, the Klik is getting pretty creepy. Rituals during a party? Ashlyn must be seriously into them to ditch an opportunity to be seen. Tension is growing between Robbie and Alex! It would be adorable if Alex fought for Belle, seriously cute. I loved this chapter, can't wait to find out what happens next! Keep it coming, it's awesome.
xMoose chapter 16 . 1/10/2009
love this. second favorite chapter!

and to think, the best is still yet to come!

keep up the amazing work!

the chp title should deff be cruel intentions.

alrighty, off to dream about my two new favorite male characters...robbie boy alex poo!

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xMoose chapter 15 . 1/8/2009
ahh sista fran!

i hate you for not telling me you posted so many chapters.

and i love you FOR posting all these chapters.

funny how you posted chp 14 - the BEST ONE YET - the day i looked at it. this just made my day...night.

ahh the memories! this is my favorite chapter at of all. well, you know, for now. all i can say is, in the words of rebecca, "smokin" ah. i love robbie and his red trunks!

i think i'll be dreaming of robbie...and alex tonight.

wo, woo. it's gonna be a party.

alrighty now.
Inactive453627 chapter 15 . 1/8/2009
Okay, wow, I didn't think this could get much more complicated, but you managed it! Robbie seems like Evil Alex, and I think I just might love it. I'm liking the new direction this is taking, and I can't wait to read about the Halloween party! Update soon, I'm dying over here :)
Vici Daily chapter 15 . 1/7/2009
Oh no...I like the new kid, but it he really hiding something? And i feel so sorry for slex (...hmpt, he had it coming though when he started to like someone in the klik. Update soon! and great chapter! D
Vici Daily chapter 14 . 1/7/2009
Oh i can't wait for you to write the chapter with the party!That will be fun to read! Oh, and are they not going out? What if they Klik just told Belle that, but they really aren't? I'm confused! D Update soon!
Vici Daily chapter 13 . 1/7/2009
Aww I feel so sorry for her! I honestly thought, though, that they were going to teepee Alex's house, not Seth's D..that would have been interesting! D lol Great chapter by the way.
Vici Daily chapter 12 . 1/6/2009
ohh i feel so sorry for alex! I cna't wait for an update, i need to know what is going to happen next! D
Vici Daily chapter 11 . 1/5/2009
Oh my gosh...at least she still has Alex though. What will she now, now that she knows about Sarah's mother?
Vici Daily chapter 10 . 1/5/2009
oh...they better not ruin anything for her...I will hate them all forever! -dramatic fist pumped into the air- D
Inactive453627 chapter 9 . 1/3/2009
I'm still loving this, it's got all the elements of a great teen horror. Keep it up, it's really great.
Vici Daily chapter 9 . 1/3/2009
YES! I'm so glad that they aren't going and the Belle still is. I hope Alex can talk some since into her before the sleepover friday, but I already know from your summary that that won't happen. sigh. where would the drama be though, right? D lol, anyway another great chapter and I can't wait for an update!
Vici Daily chapter 8 . 1/2/2009
Again GREAT story and i can't wait for an update!
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