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AmazingAmazingAmazing

:) it was a nice story really ... sweet and cute but i think it needs more of the "sweet" stuff ...

but overall it was nice though kinda predictable :)

congratulations on the nice story and keep on writing !

Very cute. Great work :)

Annoyance

Cute story. The card bit seemed a bit uncharacteristic of what we know of Justin, but it was sweet nonetheless and the actual writing definitely matched his persona.

hmm... this was great, but i personally think that it needs more fluff.. :)

Haha! That is so good-the best! P

I really liked this story, but I thought the ending was a bit abrupt, even for a oneshot. Also, the tense switches from past to present quite a bit, which is easily fixed. Good story!

aww cute story :)

Adorable! Predictable, but I loved it. :)

Cute. :)

Hey there! I thought the story was well-written and the plot was realistic. The characters got the attention and development they needed. The part with the letter seemed like it didn't fit, or that the story didn't really need it, but overall it was an enjoyable reading. Good work!

cute, so cute. chicken-scratch handwriting? :DD hehe. made my day!

Hah very cute. Fluffy, of course, but hey, it's still cute. (: I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:

Aw, very cute! The surprise of his kiss, & then her spectacular exit - soopah cute! :D

Oh, yes, and I love their relationship.

-toffeecakesxox.