Reviews for shattering
running-in-the-rain chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
life is crooked.

even a ruler is crooked.

it's merely hidden.
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
it's a hard thing to express emotions in so few words,

but you've done excellent here. :)
Guy1122 chapter 1 . 1/15/2009


Too the point.

It's true and is very relateable. Everyone feels broken at one time or another.

I like this... it's short but effective.
RiBow chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
Simple and Simply amazing. I really like this haiku. Good job on bolding the word 'broken'. :]

Wonka's Scarlett Lollies chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
Lovely. Simple, but amazing. I like what you did with the bold.
The Wandering Soul of Chaos chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
Nice wording, and excellent topic.

Reminds me of a heart when its broken.

Good job!