Reviews for Obvious
Isca chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
I like the stream-of-consciousness feel to this poem. It was like an internal dialogue.
Scarlet's Pen chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
as the last part said, the poem showed a lot of denial going on there. you conveyed it well though and i liked it!

i didn't see any mistakes so there isn't anything not to like about it. good job.