Reviews for Life doesn't come with a Script
snoopy-x chapter 2 . 12/30/2008
I'm intrigued! I wanna know the lifeguards name. He sounds hott.
hadeelohs chapter 2 . 12/30/2008
Would love to see the story evolve more. Keep up the good work! Cheers.
lalalalady chapter 2 . 12/30/2008
Ha! I have to say, I'm quite interested. I think your word choice was overall great, and I really love all the descriptions. The only things I have to point out are the grammatical errors here and there, but they aren't that noticeable, and they can be easily fixed. I hope you come out with more soon! I'm looking forward to it.