|Reviews for Moon's Acceptance|
| Maeradi chapter 1 . 4/27
AWWWWW! XD So adorable! and well written.
| Staar chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
Loved this, to bad there is not more to it...
| allsold chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
zomg...i don't think i've ever loved a onezy more than i love this. Thank you so much for putting this up!
| IRatherLikeFairytales chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
It was lovely! I liked it a lot.
| yourdearestwish chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Great story. I'm suprised more people have'nt found it! Kudos!
| xfireworkzstarx chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
I really adored the whole 'Pup' thing -
Lol, I think Drev was pretty upfront with his emotions about the woman, silly Thomas :P
I love the whole ~mate thing and werewolves~
Drev's story is very sad D: Nice little plot though!
Definitely going into my favourites and this definitely deserves more reviews!
| Alex Whitehall chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
This was a very cute story and I like the way things unfolded up until the end. I think a few more hints about the wolves of the town would be handy (since he's been there several months and thus several full moons-what happened during them?). The fact that Thomas is a wolf doesn't come as a surprise, though, so it's not necessary.
I'm not sure how I feel about Thomas' killing of the three other werewolves and Drev's reaction. I can see Thomas reacting that way, but Drev has no problems that the other man killed three people (even if they were attacking him)? Perhaps he figures it's werewolf guidelines, but it still seems like it'd be a shock.
I didn't like the paragraph back story that Drev gives Thomas at the end. I think an additional subtle hint to the reader about what happened (to point out the betrayal) is all we need. The explanation just seems to turn Thomas' mantra of "the past is in the past" and make it meaningless. I understand it could also go along with "have no secrets" and "honesty" but it felt out of place, to me.
The town is very pleasant and I like the descriptions we are given of it and the close knit community that would obviously arise from their circumstances. I also like how Drev may or may not become a werewolf (and that it's not important if he does or not). I'm kind of curious what kind of wolf he would look like.
I'm a little confused about the importance of the full moon, since Thomas can seem to shift at will (and not during the full moon, since some of it takes place the next day). Are they only forced to transform during the full moon and otherwise have control? It's not a vital point, but with standard myths in place, clarification can help the reader.
I loved his nickname for Drev, "Pup," although it'd normally indicate a younger position and immaturity, from Thomas it's definitely a term of endearment. Plus it makes Drev into "part of the pack" whether he's going to go wolfish the next full moon or not.
| Sas399 chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
I like this story very much.
Thomas, the big bear of a man, uh sorry, wolf...
and Drev, the sensitive quiet one.
It is quite romantic, in a 'rugged man' kind of way.
I like the way Drev seems unconscious yet conscious of his feelings for Thomas and loving his pet name for him.
'pup' just makes me melt in a puddle...
Thank you for sharing.
-watch out shameless begging ahead-
Is there any possibility *beg* for you to write an 'M'rated sequel to this *puppy eyes beg*, telling us if Drev got to be a werewolf and how these two rugged men, erm, mate *blush*
Anyway, sorry for this very rude and extremely selfish request, you may ignore it at your own convenience...
| Jester08 chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
Great story! keep it up! _
| llyzsm2 chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
Very nice, interesting and well paced story, thank you for posting it!
| cobraqueen17 chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
That's not really the end is it. There's a second chapter right *hopeful face*
| frogs of war chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
I saved this story until the kids were back at school (I didn't want to be interrupted while I enjoyed) and it was worth the wait.
The exclamation point breaks are good foreshadowing. I know something going happen and I can guess what it (or some of it will be).
“Drev eventually moved from his booth after he paid the bill and moved to the bar.” Left his booth, maybe?
“Drev looked over his employer’s body with the clothes blocking his view.” Without?
Very tactile man, this Thomas.
“waking up with the roster” rooster?
This might not need fixing, but “his arms wrapped around Drev’s lithe frame” is from Drev’s POV. Would he see his own frame as lithe?
And “with a man they barely knew for less than two months” is kind of chunky. barely knew or knew less than… I’m not sure you need both.
Does anybody say, “It came to pass” when talking about their own story?
It ended a little too soon. I wanted them to get hot and heavy. But I liked it.
| Death's Release chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
Aww, I loved this! Though I think Thomas needs to watch what he says when he loses his temper...haha. But, as long as Drev forgives him, I guess I can too...:))
Anyway, amazing story! Drev and Thomas are fascinating characters…and they're so perfect together! Marvelous job!