Reviews for Adopted Mafia ReDux |
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Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 26 . 10/12/2009 cant wait till book two! |
LittleWolfPup chapter 25 . 10/12/2009 I thought the ending was great with Tony confessing his feelings for Payton, once again great ending |
pbgurl chapter 26 . 10/12/2009 AH! I'm so damn HAPPY! _ |
disappearing in the shadow chapter 25 . 10/12/2009 the ending was slightly disappointing. i kind of feel like payton forgave tony to easily. she was hurt, broken, and mad and forgave him instantly after he kissed her. but otherwise that i really love this story. its awesomee. so awesome i must ask. . . will you marry me. JK hahah but awesome story. i love it. :D |
pbgurl chapter 25 . 10/12/2009 :( It's ended ... I really liked the ending with him confessing his feelings to her! Though I'm still sad that its done, I'm gonna miss it. I hope you write more stories! Maybe even more mafia stories! _ -Liz :D |
Georgia chapter 25 . 10/12/2009 Aw it's ended :( I loved it, Tony finally confessed his feelings! Yay! X) Adopted Mafia was brilliant, I suppose it will be good to have it finished. But now I won't have any of your stories to read! You'll have to write another ;) No pressure or anything. Thanks for keeping me entertained with this awesome story! |
Arabea chapter 24 . 9/18/2009 Ah! Internal conflict! And a little bit of peer pressure. lol. Marcus is all forceful now. It's kind of funny. |
pbgurl chapter 24 . 9/18/2009 ugh, Tony needs to get off his stubborn ass and go get her! But Payton needs to stop being do harheaded and tell him how she feels about him. _ -Liz :D |
disappearing in the shadow chapter 24 . 9/18/2009 he does need her. he's just in denial. hahah :P |
LittleWolfPup chapter 24 . 9/17/2009 Great Great chapter, can't wait until you update again! |
Georgia chapter 23 . 8/27/2009 HA! She's in love! XD It's so exciting. As always, you are a amazing writer. This was a great chapter, I was surprised when Payton said she was moving out; part of me was like No! and then I thought...I guess it would be kinda cool for Payton to have her very own house. I can't wait for you to update! |
LittleWolfPup chapter 23 . 8/22/2009 Great new chapter, sad that there's only TWO chapters left. update soon please. |
Arabea chapter 23 . 8/22/2009 Everyone is sad and bitter and EMO! lol. But seriously. 0_o |
disappearing in the shadow chapter 23 . 8/22/2009 u've come far with this story but i've come farther with it than u have. :P hahahah xD aww she moving. sad face. imma kinda a little high. i had some pepsi and some pizza. and yeah! yumy... she having problems with tony. hell yeah. there is a lot of unspoken things need to be said or done. ;] if u know what i mean. teheheheh xD |
000000000x chapter 22 . 8/21/2009 love it! a lot of action, good plot; can't wait to see how her father died. hope you post soon! |