Reviews for Adopted Mafia ReDux
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 26 . 10/12/2009
cant wait till book two!
LittleWolfPup chapter 25 . 10/12/2009
I thought the ending was great with Tony confessing his feelings for Payton, once again great ending
pbgurl chapter 26 . 10/12/2009
AH! I'm so damn HAPPY! _
disappearing in the shadow chapter 25 . 10/12/2009
the ending was slightly disappointing. i kind of feel like payton forgave tony to easily. she was hurt, broken, and mad and forgave him instantly after he kissed her.

but otherwise that i really love this story. its awesomee. so awesome i must ask. . .

will you marry me. JK hahah but awesome story. i love it. :D
pbgurl chapter 25 . 10/12/2009
:( It's ended ... I really liked the ending with him confessing his feelings to her! Though I'm still sad that its done, I'm gonna miss it. I hope you write more stories! Maybe even more mafia stories! _

-Liz :D
Georgia chapter 25 . 10/12/2009
Aw it's ended :( I loved it, Tony finally confessed his feelings! Yay! X)

Adopted Mafia was brilliant, I suppose it will be good to have it finished. But now I won't have any of your stories to read! You'll have to write another ;) No pressure or anything. Thanks for keeping me entertained with this awesome story!
Arabea chapter 24 . 9/18/2009
Ah! Internal conflict! And a little bit of peer pressure. lol. Marcus is all forceful now. It's kind of funny.
pbgurl chapter 24 . 9/18/2009
ugh, Tony needs to get off his stubborn ass and go get her! But Payton needs to stop being do harheaded and tell him how she feels about him. _

-Liz :D
disappearing in the shadow chapter 24 . 9/18/2009
he does need her. he's just in denial. hahah :P
LittleWolfPup chapter 24 . 9/17/2009
Great Great chapter, can't wait until you update again!
Georgia chapter 23 . 8/27/2009
HA! She's in love! XD It's so exciting.

As always, you are a amazing writer. This was a great chapter, I was surprised when Payton said she was moving out; part of me was like No! and then I thought...I guess it would be kinda cool for Payton to have her very own house. I can't wait for you to update!
LittleWolfPup chapter 23 . 8/22/2009
Great new chapter, sad that there's only TWO chapters left. update soon please.
Arabea chapter 23 . 8/22/2009
Everyone is sad and bitter and EMO! lol. But seriously. 0_o
disappearing in the shadow chapter 23 . 8/22/2009
u've come far with this story but i've come farther with it than u have. :P hahahah xD

aww she moving. sad face. imma kinda a little high. i had some pepsi and some pizza. and yeah! yumy...

she having problems with tony. hell yeah. there is a lot of unspoken things need to be said or done. ;] if u know what i mean. teheheheh xD
000000000x chapter 22 . 8/21/2009
love it! a lot of action, good plot; can't wait to see how her father died.

hope you post soon!
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