| Reviews for Adopted Mafia ReDux |
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   Arabea chapter 22 . 8/16/2009 Payton seems to have forgotten that she was shot. Or was she? Now I is just confused. 0_o That sucks that Jamie was in on it. Kinda saw it coming, though. Ah well. |
| Naeara chapter 22 . 8/15/2009 *update dance* |
| LittleWolfPup chapter 22 . 8/15/2009 WO, great chapter. HURRY HURRY update soon please |
| Killer Chipmunk chapter 22 . 8/15/2009 Oh suspense, much?... Lol. That was fantastic. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. :) KC |
| disappearing in the shadow chapter 22 . 8/15/2009 aw only 5 or 6 chappies left. :[ heheheheh its okay. :D |
| Arabea chapter 21 . 8/13/2009 Wow, Tony's twisted. 'Send me the pictures'. Sheezus. That's just wrong. Blech. |
| disappearing in the shadow chapter 21 . 8/13/2009 heyy its disappearing in the shadow i just dont want to log in so yeah gah this was kind of a blahh boring chappie but it was good. :D hehehehehe make more pizazz in next chappie. ;] |
| Naeara chapter 21 . 8/13/2009 Is it good or bad that i sniggered at the last little section of this chapter...someone obviously did Not have a good day...Keep the story coming! |
| LittleWolfPup chapter 21 . 8/12/2009 Nice charpter, review soon please |
| Arabea chapter 20 . 8/6/2009 Well, that was an interesting twist. Sorry for the short review, but I'm at work and I'm in a hurry and my break ended ten minutes ago. Ah! Gotta go. D |
| Naeara chapter 20 . 8/6/2009 Boys suck. Agreed. Gotta hate it when they interupt in the middle of a secret and important mission, especially when you've gone to all the trouble of putting on that whole outfit. Hahaha! Update again soon! |
| LittleWolfPup chapter 20 . 8/6/2009 Great chapter, please update soon. PLESE! |
| disappearing in the shadow chapter 19 . 8/4/2009 hahahaha i know. i was merely stating a fact. :P of course the reviews are awesome because the reviewers are awesomer. hahah ;] awwh gah i love this freaking story. aw i like how anger raced through him when he saw the bruises. well dat happens 2 all guys whether they "think" they dont like the girl or they do. hahahah xD and dat was mad sweet of him to take her to the gym to take her anger out on the punching bag. lolz btw her friends r mad messed up. cuz they doubt her n all. jerks. :[ lolz but it mad reasonable. |
| Naeara chapter 19 . 8/4/2009 Very glad to see an update so soon after last chapter! Love that Tony realised very quickly that Pay was Not going to be able to just rest like Leo wanted her to. That last line "Stupid imbecile, she thought to herself, trying to hide her smirk", Loved it. Keep the chapter's coming...they're helping me get through this last stretch of yr 12! |
| LittleWolfPup chapter 19 . 8/3/2009 Yay! You updated, keep up the good work. Update soon PLEASE, PLEASE? |