Reviews for Adopted Mafia ReDux |
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Arabea chapter 19 . 8/3/2009 I wish I had a punching bag. That would be kickass. Maybe it would make me want to stop hitting people. lol. Violent? Me? Not at all. I, personally, would like some time off from life. If I was Payton, I would be like, 'hell yeah!' lol. |
Naeara chapter 18 . 7/30/2009 This just gets better and better. Loving the Payton/Tony action going on. *sing song* Someones gonna die...whoa that sounds a little more Psychotic out loud than it did in my head...oh well. Update soon! |
LittleWolfPup chapter 18 . 7/30/2009 HEY you updated, can't wait until you update HURRY! |
Arabea chapter 18 . 7/30/2009 Damn. That's some messed up serious stuff that happened to her. But I totally laughed when he called out a hit - it's so cliched. Hee hee. Great chapter, though. |
disappearing in the shadow chapter 18 . 7/30/2009 aw poor payton. i feel really really bad for her. finally tony knows something. he really had no clue and he's being all soft and wants to kill someone for her. aw i want someone to kill somebody because they did something bad to me like what happened to her. well i hope im never in that situation but yeah you get the point. hahaha mario is going to come. yay! lmfao. ahaha :] update soon lolz :D |
Georgia chapter 17 . 7/28/2009 AH XD that was such a good chapter SO MUCH SUSPENSE! And I can't even tell what's going to happen next! You are so good X) As always I CAN'T WAIT for the next chapter, you keep me on the edge of my seat but I love love love it! : ) |
disappearing in the shadow chapter 17 . 7/26/2009 i been wondering where she was going and i got my answer now poor payton, she's been through so much and it doesn't really help that Tony is doubting her and so are the others even if they don't say anything :[ keep on the good ass work :D hahaha lolz |
LittleWolfPup chapter 17 . 7/25/2009 Yes I did enjoy this chapter hope you update really soon! |
Arabea chapter 17 . 7/25/2009 Wow, that was great! The story's getting pretty intense. I can't wait to read the rest! |
Twitdit chapter 16 . 7/23/2009 God i HATE cliff hangers! They SUCK! Anyways... im loving the story. It's really awesome. Keep up the good work, and PLEASE post the next chapter soon! :] |
Georgia chapter 16 . 7/16/2009 I love it! I felt so embarrassed for Payton though when Tony caught her dancing in her underwear I would hate it if something like that happened to me XD Another great chapter CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! Damn you and your cliff hanger ; ) |
LittleWolfPup chapter 16 . 7/13/2009 Great chapter, I did enjoyed it. I liked the end where he kissed her. Hope you update soon, I will be wanting. |
Arabea chapter 16 . 7/10/2009 Well, that's awkward. God, if someone caught me dancing around weird with my clothes ON I'd be embarrassed. lol. In fact, I probably wouldn't come out of my room for a LONG while. I'd become a hermit. Or just avoid that person completely. Forever. lol. |
groundhog591 chapter 16 . 7/10/2009 Aww..so sweet. So, what happens next? :) |
FerretsRevolution chapter 15 . 6/30/2009 Wow, I really love this story. I'm a sucker for Mafia stories, but this takes the cake. I love Payton's character and the whole story is progressing really nicely. This is a half-assed review, but I'm feeling really sick, so I promise to review the next chapter in full detail. Please update soon :) |