Reviews for Adopted Mafia ReDux |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I wish I had a punching bag. That would be kickass. Maybe it would make me want to stop hitting people. lol. Violent? Me? Not at all. I, personally, would like some time off from life. If I was Payton, I would be like, 'hell yeah!' lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This just gets better and better. Loving the Payton/Tony action going on. *sing song* Someones gonna die...whoa that sounds a little more Psychotic out loud than it did in my head...oh well. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HEY you updated, can't wait until you update HURRY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn. That's some messed up serious stuff that happened to her. But I totally laughed when he called out a hit - it's so cliched. Hee hee. Great chapter, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw poor payton. i feel really really bad for her. finally tony knows something. he really had no clue and he's being all soft and wants to kill someone for her. aw i want someone to kill somebody because they did something bad to me like what happened to her. well i hope im never in that situation but yeah you get the point. hahaha mario is going to come. yay! lmfao. ahaha :] update soon lolz :D |
![]() ![]() AH XD that was such a good chapter SO MUCH SUSPENSE! And I can't even tell what's going to happen next! You are so good X) As always I CAN'T WAIT for the next chapter, you keep me on the edge of my seat but I love love love it! : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i been wondering where she was going and i got my answer now poor payton, she's been through so much and it doesn't really help that Tony is doubting her and so are the others even if they don't say anything :[ keep on the good ass work :D hahaha lolz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes I did enjoy this chapter hope you update really soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was great! The story's getting pretty intense. I can't wait to read the rest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() God i HATE cliff hangers! They SUCK! Anyways... im loving the story. It's really awesome. Keep up the good work, and PLEASE post the next chapter soon! :] |
![]() ![]() I love it! I felt so embarrassed for Payton though when Tony caught her dancing in her underwear I would hate it if something like that happened to me XD Another great chapter CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! Damn you and your cliff hanger ; ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, I did enjoyed it. I liked the end where he kissed her. Hope you update soon, I will be wanting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that's awkward. God, if someone caught me dancing around weird with my clothes ON I'd be embarrassed. lol. In fact, I probably wouldn't come out of my room for a LONG while. I'd become a hermit. Or just avoid that person completely. Forever. lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww..so sweet. So, what happens next? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I really love this story. I'm a sucker for Mafia stories, but this takes the cake. I love Payton's character and the whole story is progressing really nicely. This is a half-assed review, but I'm feeling really sick, so I promise to review the next chapter in full detail. Please update soon :) |