Reviews for The Underworld |
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![]() ![]() ![]() amazing story but i cannot seem to find it on your blog |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please upadate! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing! Where can I read the rest of the story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story so far. I love all the chara. in this. I cant wait until the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really interested in this story but can't get to the link you've put at the bottom of your page to read more. Has the page expired? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was absolutely fabulous! Really! I read it in pieces, but I may go back and read it again soon! I liked pretty much everything about it, from your from characterization to the dialogue, everything really clicked and made for a really enjoyable read! Fabulous (yep, I'm repeating myself but it gets the point across)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy toledo this is good. I really like it a lot! great take on the myth. I'd love to read more, but I can't seem to access your blog. could you tell me, in how-to for dummies speech, how to access it? thanks. D.A.L |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think that this is good. You've started it off with a whole lot of mystery, and while I think you could have given some sort of background for the readers to connect with Cora, who is the protagonist, I haven't forgotten that myths never really gave a detailed background of their heroes/heroines. If my memory serves, I don't think persephone had much a background that the readers knew about either. Other than that, this story is intriguing, and i plan to read more. keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() This is a fantastic story. I can't wait to read more of it. I never saw all that deception coming! |
![]() ![]() this story is absolutly amazing...probably the best i have rea on this site so far! I'm addicted to it I won't lie. It's absolutely painful not knowing whats going to hapen! I can't wait for an updat...but I really do hope Cora and Marcus remain together in the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is very intriguing and I hope that you will update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really good! please update soon. ciao |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story. |
![]() ![]() This story was one of the BEST! loved everythign about it! the writing style, the chemistry between the characters, the flow... EVERYTHING! beautiful BEAUTIFUL story... can't wait for more! truly... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you so much for writing! I like this story. Please update. |