|Reviews for MM Goodness — Oneshots|
| rockspapersnscissors chapter 16 . 11/11/2013
I loved this! It is so original! :D Awesome job!
| Riayl chapter 5 . 9/20/2013
Father Haisley is super creepy. *shudder* He definitely gives a "horror" feeling to this much more so than the fertility god. Nasty little man. *nods* I liked the god/being and Malachi. Oh, and the green rubbing off on Malachi, that was a neat detail!
| Riayl chapter 4 . 9/20/2013
I loved the part where Arnvid gives Colin the cloth, then pulls it over his head when he is blushing. The whole scene was very easy for me to picture in my head and it totally turned me to mush. lol :)
| Riayl chapter 3 . 9/20/2013
Does it make me terribly twisted that I find Danson's willingness to kill for his mother and lover much sexier than if he was willing to die for them? I've always thought that way. I mean, dying to protect someone you love is noble and all, but then they are alone, if, instead, you kill the bad guys, then the ones you love are still protected and they still have you. Perfect! :)
| Em chapter 16 . 4/25/2013
That was incredible... I love the idea of having many one shots all together! Makes it so much easier to read all your beautiful stories :D The Rum story was lovely; it's always exciting tower a well known story from a completely different perspective. I also really enjoyed, oh well, all of it really, such incredible and original stories! Well done, and thank you for sharing your talents with us! Xx
| Sannah chapter 7 . 4/25/2013
I heard a song 'knock 123' which i thought would go quite well with this oneshot, or a similar scenario anyway...
You kept the tension throughout this short story very well.
| ketchupblood1 chapter 16 . 4/1/2013
Awww. I love this take on Rumpelstiltzkin! You wrote out his motivation for wanting a child really well. :D
| Angelic Phantomcrow chapter 16 . 4/1/2013
Rum is so sweet.
At least the king...
This two are so nice together.
And in the end Rum got his child.
Even with his beloved.
I'm so happy for him.
I love this story and so
Thank you very much for sharing it!
| Soraya Zeeva chapter 13 . 8/26/2012
I think I'd prefer just the hand touching, except for when the right one(s) came along.
| Sapphire2619 chapter 13 . 7/30/2012
Eeeeehhhh great start but the ending left me not liking the story since it seems like Gyorgy is brainwashed and doesn't have a choice in the end of it all.
| methosdeb chapter 13 . 7/29/2012
loved it ,I hope you write more about these guys,its a very interesting story.
| The Green Eye chapter 12 . 7/23/2012
Haha sigh... my peverted mind really did love this chapter...
| The Green Eye chapter 5 . 7/23/2012
Haha wow, this was written really well! I wonder what Malachi was thinking during all this. :)
| hedrosped chapter 5 . 7/14/2012
I love that you took the idea of the fertility god from a crappy book! I have had the same experience (minus the writing it down part) so many times. Mine mostly come from shorter stories that piss me off from lack of character development and motivation. Thanks for sharing, I'm sure your version is much better.
| Orio K chapter 11 . 3/21/2012
I just love your writing. You're pretty much the only author on FP that I still follow and look forward to getting alerts from. I like Dirk a lot as a character, though I think you did a god job with all of them.
I was wondering what the narrator's name is. The story doesn't need it obviously, and I like that you can really get into the story through the first person narration, but I was wondering, haha.