Reviews for Hanging by a Thread
Luce-Juice chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
hmm, i cant work out if i liked this, or if i found it scary ... go for both :)
Yellow Cotton Hat chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Tell me this is not only a one shot!

WHAT DO YOU LIKE MY STORY FOR!

This is amazingly written, I can FEEL the angst, the fear, the EVERYTHING.

You have my stomach churning like a ruddy mill.

Eh.

Amazing.

Horribly amazing.
Annie chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Oh, so twisted it's sweet.
Emoshun15 chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Cal is scary.../Shivers Good job! D

-Kiri
Poptart Guava King chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
Yes. He probably did. -_-
alwaysfaith chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
God, you write beautiful.

And the whole thing was a beautiful masterpiece of flowing words and adrenalin. I actually thought Cal was going to force him to jump off with him, but then it ended up...pretty good I guess, in my eyes. Probably not Avery. Cal does seem very dangerous.

x,

Faith
Sunny chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
I actually really, really like this; but, maybe that's just me and my love for unscapable ultimatiums. I really like Cal, too.
transitionofthe chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
Okay. That is not a happy ending. My joy bubble has been popped. You have to add another chapter to make it all better. I mean, seriously, he feels like he made a terrible mistake. Okay, that ending leaves you hanging, but it's kind depressing.
MacKitty chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
...i feel really bad for avery. this story has a really fascinating aspect.

it still makes me sad though. in a good way, i'm sure
TejiSunflower chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Wow. Just wow. Your writing is absolutely incredible. I can't wait to read more of this. Cal is kinda creepy but at least Avery has somewhere to live right now. By the way, how old are they? High school? College? Graduated?
kawaii-kitsune-thief chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
o.o Certainly interesting! Poisonous couples has always been an enticing topic to read. I would love to see more of this couple.
sweetdonalbain81507 chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
That was really...pretty, I suppose, is the best word for it. It was Titanic, yes? I have to admit, I was kind of giggling throughout that part when I figured it out...but that's just me. Anywho.

I really loved the way that Cal called Avery by little pet names. He's really not a picture of mental health, is he?

I also adored the fact that they aren't going to be happy, and they aren't in love. It added a certain...I'm not sure. Almost reality, but not quite.

Very well done.
plumblossom chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Oh. my.

This is not going to end well.

Good job.
Ninjapocky chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
Titanic! ... amirite...?

It was...hmm... awesome? Is that the word I'm looking for? Yes, I think it is. hah. I have such a way with words. xD
firestar267 chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
holy crap that was well written! Damn it being a oneshot because I want more :(

what was the movie scene?