Reviews for Broken Boy Soldier
romaniac chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Nice qoute at the start of the description!A bit deppressing but its an epic poem.
Edalene Athene chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Wow, this gave me goosebumps.
fictionalxbliss chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Oh my goodness, that actually made me cry. And it gave me goosebumps. Oh, wow. That was really good. :)
disused account chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Cry cry he's so dead. Good, very good. Cool if you coulda rhymed it, but rules all the same so I am to blame :D
Pinnacle of Pan chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
Chilling. The rhyme adds to the poem and really sends the message through. The last lines of the poem almost made me cry. The image of a father waiting for the son that will never come, with a birthday cake is very poignant
grape.soda.pop chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
Aww! That's so sad...

Great job...

Cramelity chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
good job.