huh. i liked terrence. terrance? i dont know. D:

sex with three different guys in one day... i love elyria :D

HOOLY SHIX! OMG OMG...So i just read this WHOLE THING...in like 2dayz...so im late i like looking for complete stuff...but anyway.. IT"S AWESOME and EPIC! and even tho i hate to lose Elyria the ending was...well...wonderful. You're an awesome writer and if you have any other stories on your page im gonna go read them now :D!

A sequel should be made since you left so many things unsolved. Not very satisfying nor any closure (well some).

What? No! This is so sad...

I really really like your story.

It's sexy, brutal, clever and captivating!

At some lines a bit confusing, but not much. :)

DA-chen

wow...just...wow

OMG ELYRIA! D:

no.

D:

UUH! I hate that that happened to Elyria! (Which, of course, means the story was great since it provoked so much emotion.)

But what is going to happen to Eli & Kyrianna now?

OK, so is she a vampire? Part vampire? But how did she revert back to just a necromancer? I hope we get an explanation for this.

So Kai is drinking more of her blood right after she just lost a ton of it. How much blood can a necromancer lose? Why didn't Eli & Kyrianna stop them from leaving her with Kai when she was so hurt?

Oh no. She is really in a bad situation, but I'm sure she'll figure a way out. Right?

Good chapter, although her suicidal tendency seemed to happen too suddenly. would have been more believable if she'd had those sort of thoughts earlier.

Such a sweet chapter after all the chaos. Can't they just have a threesome? :)

OK, there's the action I have been waiting for. Nice descriptions of the fighting and bloody scene. Poor Kyrianna.

Great action! Maybe Elyria & Eli can be happy together now. But the werewolves are going to be after her...