I can only assume that Kai will want to finish what they started on the couch eventually, as well as more blood. I don't feel disappointed at Bridgette for her having sex with Kai, its just the way she is. I wonder if Eli and/or Kyrianna will say anything about the way she looked when they all came into the room. And it was a great idea to end the chapter on such a happy note, with her being in a pink shirt.

i have never read a story like this before, and truth be told i love this story. I can wait til the next chapter.

Damn... And I thought he was a nice one... I hope he doesn't hurt her... And maybe she will fall in love with him and out of love with Eli... And maybe he will fall in love with her... And what exactly did she turn into?

A VERY interesting and surprising chapter. I'm glad that she found the power to save herself. Is she becoming a vampire in some way? I hope you explain what it is that is happening to her soon. And what's up with this Kai guy, hes unnerving.

Wow. This is a really great story. This last chapter was awesome. Very exciting. I can't wait for the next installment.

A good action filled chapter, well written. It would be nice if she did have a guardian angel, but I'm kinda getting the feeling that Eli will turn out to be that guardian, and at the perfect moment too.

Sad ending to this chapter but it was nicely written. She should at least try to stop fighting and just go away with Eli and Kyrianna, but of course that wont happen. Anyways I hope the next one wont be as sad. Something good needs to happen.

Ohh another chapter!

Wow, I'm so glad I came upon this story! It's so interesting~ Kyrianna kinda annoys me though.. she's so weak and I wish she would just disappear so that Eli and Elyria could get together LOL. Am I being mean? xD

Can't wait for the next update!

Rut roh...

A disturbing dream to have indeed. Why was Eli not really affected by it though, something doesn't seem right. It was a good idea to slip in a sex scene after the dream part, made the chapter seem less serious. And what is a were doing at her place? And why hasn't Eli sensed it, or is he just that tired?

Poor girl... why can't she just have both? I mean why does Eli care that much if she likes another girl? She still loves him...

Of course as soon as one problem goes away another comes along to replace it, poor girl always having something to deal with. I had figured something like this would eventually happen. I can't imagine what will become of all of this, I just hope it ends well.

Polygamous relationship for the win?

Elodie~

I liked this chapter, interesting to see her cry. Very well written.

Aw, poor Kyrianna. ): Keep it up and update soon!

Faith