I love Derrick.

Terrence is an asshole.

And I pity Eli.

I mean... all that sexiness that is Elyria and he does not get to fondle!

He is a deprived kid.

But you are awesome.

The writing is awesome.

The story is awesome.

Awesome awesomeness.

I think... that she likes to be dominated!

whether she admits it or not, she loves it.

but I love you and your amazing writing skills, and your stories full of sex and blood and sexiness and your characters with hair with magic powers.

Haha.

but you have amazing skill and my thesaurus is nowhere near so you only get one adjective.

I love this story. I can't wait for the next update.

This story has really good potential! Hope you update soon :D

Very interesting, I cannot wait to see where your going to go with this.

Good chapter. I liked it. Keep it up and update soon :)

Faith

Another great chapter! I look forward to your next update!

Good chapter, I really enjoyed it. I like this so far. Keep it up and update soon!

Faith

i really love the story (:

& Derrick is so sweet (Along with Eli)

i hope Derrick doesnt get killed!

And wont Terrance notice her neck?

its basically torn? lol

PLEASE UPDATE!

I love this story so far. Please update soon. It would be interesting to see what happens from here!

Great story! I love the main character's attitude to sex and blood!

awesome story! i reli liked it!

~good luck writing!

Ah ha! I told you that you write amazing beginnings, and I'm not the only one who thinks so!

But... Yeah... You're an amazing writer.

I love your characters!

Minus Terrence, of course.

I like the beginning of this, it's very interesting. Keep it up and update soon!

Faith